Thursday, April 5, 2007

Pg 79 - Still Here -

The old script is really making me wince through these next few pages, but there's only so much I can do as far as making text fit into the layout that I drew the line art to. I know the collage/medley thing is a little tedious as far as hoping for an update with more story, but I hope you bear with it. Initially, this medley thing that is comprised of chapter 7 was all supposed to be the bulk of the story. Chapter after chapter logging Shawn and Emma's daily life ... I dunno, it seemed like very draining filler content after I went over the script (draining to me as the artist and you as the reader). So, I scrapped the layouts and scripts and just chose the highlights to squish all into one chapter. Call it streamlining or call it lazy, your choice. ^_^

As for comments on the page ... there's not much to say. I'm not happy with it - it was a page I was dreading. There was supposed to be a Princess Nine cameo (Izumi in the batting cages) but she got lost behind the balloons and it drew attention to the crappy chain-linked fence - so that layer got canned.

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